Dark Angel

Hi Blackpencil, I'll be reveiwing you work today! :D I really like the third person point of veiw of it, not many people do that! :D Now for the nitpicks. ...

I have to say that this is a great story! I'm glad I get to be your reviewer right now! :D I pressed my hands onto the wall searching for ...

First of all let me say that your outline of the story is great!! I have read two books that were about a girl with cancer so I know a ...

First of all, let me say that I really liked the outline of your story and it could be great with just a little editing. :D Was it really my ...

Okay, first of all let me say that your story is very interesting and I loved it before you hate my guts after the corrections. :D As she caught up, ...

Well, Vanessa is a demon/ angel damned to hell and Lucifer is the devil. Vanessa lives on sins, since she is a demon, and can influence people's thoughts and actions, ...

Vanessa flipped her black hair and took off to the sky. She flew over mountains and grassy plains, oceans and rivers, but she could not find her destination: Heaven. Lucifer ...

First of all let me say i'm sorry if I sound mean, I'm just really nitpicky. :) Today i was cleaning her room, didn't want to but had to, or ...